all of them.’ weak. try ‘my hands were covered in blood.’ more direct. verbs. always verbs.（但是这里。‘上面全是血。’太弱。试试‘我的双手沾满了血。’更直接。动词。永远用动词。）”
“read it. aloud.（读出来。大声读。）”
我：“she didn\''t say it\''s okay. she just went out and came back with blood on her hands.（她没有说没事。她只是走出去，回来的时候双手沾满了血。）”
姐姐：“good.（好。）”
“but you forgot one thing.（但你忘了一件事。）”
我：“……what.（……什么。）”
姐姐：“you were crying when i came back.（我回来的时候你在哭。）”
“your face was a mess.（你的脸一塌糊涂。）”
我：“……i wasn\''t crying.”
（……我没哭。）
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